Elevator Pitch No. 3
Link:
https://youtu.be/LVvZ1SqdKAM
My feedback last time was very positive however some people noted that I said "um" a lot instead of just pausing to think. This time I made sure to practice more before recording so I was confident with what I was gonna say. This elevator pitch I also made more UF oriented instead of just general college oriented because I think it makes it more powerful.
https://youtu.be/LVvZ1SqdKAM
My feedback last time was very positive however some people noted that I said "um" a lot instead of just pausing to think. This time I made sure to practice more before recording so I was confident with what I was gonna say. This elevator pitch I also made more UF oriented instead of just general college oriented because I think it makes it more powerful.
It sounds like you did a fantastic job not using the word “um” during this elevator pitch. It sounded so much better this time and it made it known that you are confident and know what you want to say about your product. I think you could include a little more information on the type of fans and maybe where the water for the mist will come from.
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