Elevator Pitch No. 2
https://youtu.be/sUjaqUP0TtQ
My last elevator pitch I got great feedback. It was as anticipated since I love presenting and I naturally talk dynamically. Something I lacked was something to grab the attention of the people I'm pitching to. This time I tried to use something exciting about UF to catch the audience.
My last elevator pitch I got great feedback. It was as anticipated since I love presenting and I naturally talk dynamically. Something I lacked was something to grab the attention of the people I'm pitching to. This time I tried to use something exciting about UF to catch the audience.
Great job on your elevator pitch! I liked how you used your hands to emphasize certain things that you were describing. Additionally, I thought that your introduction was very powerful. You opened up by describing the positive parts of UF, which catches the attention of the audience and puts them in a great mood. Also, you were well dressed and looked very professional. Overall I believe you successfully described and sold your product.
ReplyDeleteI think that you did an awesome job here by seeming very natural while speaking. You also do a good job of explaining your product and the use of it. During this you also identify your customer and explain why this would be useful for them. The only thing I think you could work on a little bit is saying “uh” or “um” instead of just pausing to collect thoughts and continue talking.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was done really professionally and naturally. You were well dressed, and conveyed the subject matter fluidly. I think that your use of UF was helpful in grabbing my attention, and because of that, the rest of the video was more inviting. Well done.